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CELPIP, Writing Task 1: Writing an Email

Request For Apartment Viewing: sample answer

A model answer to this exam-style CELPIP writing an email question, written to a level 10 target. See the question, the full answer and exactly why it works, then try it yourself.

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Task
Writing an Email
Time
27 minutes
Answer length
159 words
Written to
Level 10 target

The question

Situation

You found an apartment advertisement online and are interested in renting it next month.

Task

Write an email to the property agent in about 150-200 words. In your email:

  • Explain how you found the apartment
  • Describe your rental needs and move-in date
  • Ask to arrange a viewing and confirm the rent

Sample answer

Linking words are highlighted: they show the structure a rater follows.

Dear Property Agent,

I am writing to express my strong interest in the apartment advertisement that I recently found online. I am looking for a comfortable place to rent starting next month, as my current lease is expiring soon and I need to relocate without any delay.

Regarding my rental needs, I am looking for a quiet one-bedroom unit with good natural light and an in-suite laundry. Since I work from home most of the week, having a reliable internet connection and a peaceful environment is essential for my daily routine.

Therefore, I would greatly appreciate it if you could arrange a viewing for this weekend and confirm the monthly rent. Please let me know which specific times work best for you. I am happy to provide any references, employment documents, or additional information that you might require.

Thank you for your time and assistance with this matter. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,

Jordan Lee

159 words

Why it works

What you can measure in this answer, and what CELPIP raters mark.

  • The right length. 159 words: inside the required 150–200, in 7 paragraphs.
  • Clear links between ideas: “therefore”, “since”. They make the answer easy to follow, which raters reward under coherence.
  • 7 paragraphs, each with its own job, so the reader can follow the answer at a glance.

How CELPIP marks writing an email

  • Content & CoherenceLevel 1–12

    Enough relevant ideas, organised clearly and supported with detail.

  • VocabularyLevel 1–12

    Words chosen precisely and appropriately for the topic.

  • ReadabilityLevel 1–12

    Paragraphing, linking words, grammar, spelling and punctuation.

  • Task FulfillmentLevel 1–12

    Answers every part, with the right tone and length.

Writing Task 1: Writing an Email guide Template Tips

Common questions

How many words should a CELPIP Writing Task 1: Writing an Email answer have?

The task asks for 150 to 200 words, written in 27 minutes. This sample is 159 words.

How is CELPIP Writing Task 1: Writing an Email scored?

CELPIP marks it on Content & Coherence, Vocabulary, Readability, Task Fulfillment, each on a Level 1 to 12 scale. Your result for the task comes from these together.

Is this a real CELPIP question?

No. It's an original, exam-style question written to match the official format. Nobody can legally publish real test questions.

Should I memorise this answer?

No. Use it to see the structure, length and linking words that work, then answer in your own words. Memorised answers rarely fit a new question and raters notice.

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